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+++ b/booklet.tex	Mon Aug 17 16:54:18 2015 +0800
@@ -584,7 +584,7 @@
 end of this booklet.\bigskip
 
 \noindent
-Breakfast and lunches are served on 1st Floor next to hotel
+Breakfast and lunches are served on the 1st Floor next to hotel
 registration desk. The breakfast buffet is open from 7:00
 until 9:00. When you check into the hotel, you will receive a
 green paper ticket for each day, which you have to show before
@@ -594,13 +594,15 @@
 
 \begin{itemize}
 \item\textbf{Near the Hotel}\hspace{3mm}
-The Hanyuan hotel is located at the intersection of a big road
+The Hanyuan hotel is located at the intersection of a big 
+road
 (Houbiaoying Road 后标营路) and a smaller road (TongWei Road 童卫路).
 If you need a taxi to go to Downtown Nanjing, for example, it
-is probably the easiest to hail down a taxi at the big street.
+is probably the easiest to hail down a taxi at the big road.
 An ATM machine is situated a few minutes down the smaller
 TongWei Road. If you want to take a walk in the evening,
-Xingyuan suggests a stroll through the Purple Mountain Area on
+Xingyuan suggests a stroll through the Purple Mountain Area 
+indicated on
 the top-right in the map in Fig.~\ref{hotelmap}. This area is
 approximately a 15 minutes walk away from the hotel and
 contains for example the Sun Yat Sen memorial and the Linggu
@@ -635,11 +637,11 @@
 \end{figure}
 
 \item\textbf{Shops and Restaurants Near the Hotel}\hspace{3mm}
-There is a very nice shopping area close to Xiamafang Metro 
-Station. There is a wide selection of restaurants in this
-area including Xingyuan's favourite restaurant for having
-lunch on workdays. It is called ?? and situated behind the 
-KFC.
+There is a relatively large shopping area close to Xiamafang
+Metro Station. There is also a wide selection of restaurants
+in this area including Xingyuan's favourite restaurant for
+having lunch on workdays. It is called ?? and situated behind
+the KFC.
 
 \begin{center}
 \includegraphics[scale=0.05]{travel_guide/rest.jpg}
@@ -649,7 +651,7 @@
 which stocks pastries similar to the ones you might find in a 
 Western bakery (just in case you get bored of the baozi
 at breakfast in the hotel). There is also pizza place in 
-case you need  must eat something different than Chinese. 
+case you must eat something different than Chinese. 
 
 There is also a smaller shopping area in the ``middle'' of 
 Tongwei road including some native restaurants, and also some




