--- a/booklet.tex	Mon Aug 17 16:54:18 2015 +0800
+++ b/booklet.tex	Mon Aug 17 16:58:05 2015 +0800
@@ -633,7 +633,8 @@
 \caption{Shops and restaurants in the vicinity of the hotel.
 A relatively large shopping area including a large supermarket
 (indicated with a red star)
-is near the Xiamafang metro station.\label{hotelmap}}
+is near the Xiamafang metro station. A smaller
+supermarket is at the end of Tongwei Road.\label{hotelmap}}
 \end{figure}
 
 \item\textbf{Shops and Restaurants Near the Hotel}\hspace{3mm}
@@ -662,19 +663,20 @@
 
 \section{Further Afield}
 
-If you take the metro, you are very quickly in the downtown
-area of Nanjing (see metro map in Fig.~\ref{metronanjing}). 
+If you take the very cheap metro, you are very quickly in the
+downtown area of Nanjing (see metro map in
+Fig.~\ref{metronanjing}). 
 
 \begin{itemize}
 \item\textbf{Shopping}\hspace{3mm}
-The most serious shopping malls in Nanjing can be found in the
+The most serious shopping malls in Nanjing are in the
 area around Xinjiekou and Daxinggong metro stations (on
 Line~2). Be aware that especially in multi-brand shopping
 malls the shopping goes like this: (1) You find something you
 like. (2) You agree the prize with the shop-assistant. (3) You
 get a piece of paper, which you need to take to a cashier
 nearby. (4) You pay there, get another piece of paper, which
-you take back to the store, where you (5) receive your goods.
+you take back to the shop-assistant, where you (5) receive your goods.
 Another ``quirk'' of shopping in China is that when the sale says,
 for example, ``80\% off'', it is actually 20\% off, meaning
 you pay only 80\% of the original price.